Friday, 7 June 2019
My Circus
Our class has been reading a book called Dumbo with our Student Teacher Miss Elise. She has been making comprehension questions and fun activities for us to complete. A few weeks ago, we had to make our own Circus. Some people made theirs out of play dough, paper and even in Weetbix boxes. Most of us did yours on our devices. This is my Circus.
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Hey Neveah,
ReplyDeleteNice post! I really like the way you explained the activity or post you are doing. I also like the detail you put in your actual post. There wasn't really anything I could find that was a mistake so good job!
Hi Nevaeh! Your circus is very interesting! The thing I like about it was 'Fishing for ducks' I think that, that was very creative of you to put it in your circus. Maybe next time you can add different characters that do their acts for the circus like animals that do different tricks etc. You have done amazing for your circus! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work Nevaeh!
ReplyDeleteHi Nevaeh!This is Ramsay. I loved the duck pool and the fishing rods. Next time you could add some information about each activity and maybe make it a bit more like a circus instead of a carnival? What animals are there included too? Everything is great though, I also enjoyed looking at the amount of detail you put into the merry-go-round. Have you thought of any animal include for the circus? All your work is great! Hope to hear from you soon!
ReplyDeleteHi Nevaeh,
ReplyDeleteYou Circus is amazing! Something I liked about it was the Duck Pool and the Merry-Go-Round. Next time maybe you could add different types of animals or more fun games to do. Again, you have done an amazing job on your circus and I'm looking forward to seeing more work from you Nevaeh.