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Thursday, 28 March 2019

Pushed or not?


Pushed or not? 

 Pig the pug recently fell out the window of his apartment complex on Wednesday. Trevor, the sausage dog saw it all unfold. Trevor said when we interviewed him… “I swear I did not push him! He was being very greedy and rude! He as been nasty to me for years. Never shares his toys and always gets me in trouble. He would not share with me so he gathered all of our toys and put them in one big pile and climbed to the top. Then he started wobbling, lost his balance and fell out the window.” 

 Pop and fizzle the twin cats next door, claim they heard pig telling Trevor not to push him out the window. We secretly attached microphones to their clothing and what we heard was crazy! “Great job. I think we really fooled the press” Is this the answer to the investigation or are they telling lies

The question is “Did he really just fall?” Was he pushed? What was Trevor's drive for this crime? And is Trevor really as innocent as he claims?

2 comments:

  1. Hi Nevaeh,
    I loved loved loved your story. It hooked me in so much. I have no bad comments on it! I can't wait for a part two!
    My favourite part was about "Pop and Fizzle, the twin cats"! So creative!
    From Lauren

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  2. Hi Nevaeh
    You newspaper article is amazing I loved the way you put lies from other animals next door. One thing you need to work on is going back to check if it makes scene.
    From Sam

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