WALT: Write a weather poem using strong verbs
Children were dashing across the court, as the hail tackled and fought.
The trees are having a real big fit, as the grass begins to get hit. It gets so cold outside the animals begin to hide. If a fire was lit it would be sure to go out, I bet you 1k it would be freezing someone's snout. The hail is bouncing up and down as it hits hard against the ground.
kia ora Nevaeh,I really liked this it reminds me of when me and my sister were watching a storm one thing that I think you should work on is changing the title to something more interesting but apart from that it was really good.
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