WALT: Write a character description and use 'Show, not tell' in our writing.
Pig the Pug
Pig the Pug is very round. Pig has wrinkles all over his body. He is short and stumpy and could burst his pants any minute. His eyes can look left and right at the same time. Because of his appearance, he creeps little kids out.
Pig the Pug loves the attention and thinks he is the best. He does not like it when Trevor gets attention. He is great at getting people to look at him and love him because he is hotter than Trevor. Pig needs attention to feed off and stay ALIVE!
Pig the Pug is not very nice. He has a bit of a sharp tongue to him. This can make his friends feel worthless and used. He does not have many friends because he shoves them then puts on a performance to get your attention. Self-absorbed pig!
Pig the Pug has a very cluttered room. It is like his room is confused. He lets his clothes fall out of the wardrobe, and straight on the floor. If his mum asks him to clean his room. His response is "Don't come in here then!" Yep, gross room.
What I found easy: Finding the words to use.
What I found difficult: Finding the words that best suit that sentence.
What I Found interesting: Having the topics in ordered paragraphs.
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