WALT: Compose a poem about the waterside on school camp.
Legally speeding
I walked up the five mega wet, muddy and very grassy steps. I am greeted my Lauren and challenged to a race. We step up onto a carpet platform and sit down ready to go. My body slithered onto the black tube.
GO! We raced down the opened black tube. Looking at each other as we are accelerating down the slide. The water clinging to our bodies like a bad smell.
We each look down, dreading the deep dip. Finally the water squirts everywhere as I slip through the thin water sheet. My eyes start to sting from all the water. I slide onto a black track. Oh no!! I keeped sliding. Mud all up my legs and i softly slip on the muddy ground. I bet you anyway Lauren. Ha Ha!
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